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Open Poetry #48

An Evening Stroll

Nigelinoz
Member

since 2012-07-24

Posts 71
Victoria,Australia

0 posted 2012-08-02 08:56 AM

Shall we go for an evening stroll
Heart to heart and soul to soul
Shall we walk on the clean white sand
Shall we walk,hand in hand.
Shall we walk arm in arm
Keep each other safe from harm
Shall we walk life's long road
And shall we share life's heavy load
I ask these questions for one reason only
Life is a journey and I'm here feeling lonely.

You may as well give cherries to a pig as give advice to a fool-
Irish Proverb

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-08-02 09:19 AM

Ah, Nigelinoz, I relate. You put the lonely in a time capsule with this poem. Very well done.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Nigelinoz
Member

since 2012-07-24

Posts 71
Victoria,Australia

2 posted 2012-08-02 09:25 AM

Thank You so much for those very kind words Jerry,I always value your opinion of my work very highly and appreciate your kindness.
Cheers
Nigel

You may as well give cherries to a pig as give advice to a fool-
Irish Proverb

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

3 posted 2012-08-02 03:51 PM

Your sweetheart will surely love this romantic stroll...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

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