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Peace Filled Mind
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada 
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Peace Filled Mind I reach out to the clouds looking for a vision touching softness of day letting harmony grow No matter the harshness of a world in turmoil with anger and hatred my heart feels tenderness Read words that touch the soul with visions of sweetness written from deep within from the muse of poets I feel the gentle winds caress my burning flesh suddenly skies darken the velvet night descends Searching the star-filled skies hoping other eyes see eternal universe sharing the moons’ fullness The heart will ever be existing love to share offering perfect truth from now known peace filled mind Karen Mc Neil August 1, 2012 *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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Nigelinoz Member
since 2012-07-24
Posts 71Victoria,Australia |
Karen I think this is one of the finest poems I have read here,I particularly like these lines- "Read words that touch the soul with visions of sweetness written from deep within from the muse of poets' to me that says it all about the sometimes cathartic experience of writing poetry. This is beautiful stuff and deserves highest praise. Thanks for posting it Karen. Cheers Nigel You may as well give cherries to a pig as give advice to a fool- |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Another beauty, Karen. Much feeling and deep concentration within the lines of this poem. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The peacefulness you write of comes across in such a gentle way. Your presence of mind is quite soothing to read and surround ones self with. Lovely Star~ |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Lovely writing. Karen. Ida |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
Thank you all for reading and the wonderful comments...they made me blush...*BIG HUGS* to all of you *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
fine positive writing! Pleasure read. "The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts" |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Very nice writing. Enjoyed reading. Thank you for sharing. Goldenrose. music was my refuge.i could crawl into the spaces between the notes and curl my back to loneliness - Maya Angelou |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Amen! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: And that is a sign of your wisdom and beauty, dear Karen. Most beautiful work. Margherita |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Beautiful just perfect, what a treat to read your peace filled words and stay content in star filled skies. Really excellent poem written by a beautiful soul x x x Do I love it? You know I do. as always Mushy Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
some would say you are 'star-struck' my friend. I would say you're just a caring, feeling, loving individual... well done. j. |
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