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I Wrote This Poem For You
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I Wrote This Poem For You |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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 Uploaded with ImageShack.us this poem is for you it's uncomplicated as my poems are wont to be especially those I write for you here is the suggestion of a shroud strong thoughts of what you mean to me falsehoods are not my fortè this poem talks of summer heat and your fair throat quenching thirst with cool spring water seeing my image reflected in the pool ©July 4, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
Beautifully romantic...simple and tender...a joy to read this sweet message...*BIG HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ah, you always know the perfect words to say, Karen . . . Thank yew. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Karen said it well. I swear you could romance the pants off a nun! Lori  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you, Lori, very much. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you Passing Shadows. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Nigelinoz Member
since 2012-07-24
Posts 71Victoria,Australia |
A great poem Jerry Pat, In my opinion the day romance dies is the day the world ends ,it is the glue that bonds all true love together. Thanks for another really nice poem. Cheers N'oz You may as well give cherries to a pig as give advice to a fool- |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank YOU, N'oz, for another very nice comment. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Picture as well as poetry perfection... beautiful! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Your comments are always so welcomed, Karilea, thank you very much. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
This certainly has some kick for an "uncomplicated" poem, JP. You do romance very well, my friend. Michael |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I appreciate the compliment, Michael, very much. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Beautifully romantic! This should make any recipient smil! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Many thanks, suthern, I think it did make her smile. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Your poem makes me smile, well done. Ms. E |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you very much, Ms. E. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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