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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa 
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SEEING 29 April 2012 Dreaming into the light swimming flying embracing touching the spreading awareness warm light light losing self in the light light finding the harmony of balance in namaste and ubuntu and the messages of the clouds in the light light spreading amongst tall sunpainted autumn grasses inhaling the unconscious grace of a giraffe melting into the late afternoon gold of light caressing the shadows and drawing them into the light light light . . . Owl |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
Oh my gosh...this poem is so filled with harmony and balance...I love the way it takes the soul on a flight that is stunning to behold...very well done... I love it...seeing is so important but you have your reader seeing and feeling...*BIG HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Had to look up ubuntu, but the rest of the poem was crystal clear to me as you wove perfection within the lines of this reaching out piece of poetry . . . ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Startime. I am glad you enjoyed it so much. Smiles. What a beautiful response, Jerry. Thank you. Owl |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
For a few minutes, the workday faded away and I was in a better place... Beautiful! *S* |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Ruth, I am honoured and happy that my poem did that for you. Thank you. Owl |
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