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Nigelinoz
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since 2012-07-24
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Victoria,Australia

0 posted 2012-07-27 03:10 AM



It's nearly time to make the call.
Pulse is quickening,heart is racing,
breathing heavier.
Palms sweaty
It's ringing,she answers.
What joy,what glory
Oh the voice ,voice of an angel
We talk of many things,we declare our love
endlessly,we make plans.
2 hours go by like seconds
And it's time for her to sleep
Promises to call again tomorrow
And as soon as it started she is gone
And I'm alone with my thoughts and loneliness till the morrow.

You may as well give cherries to a pig as give advice to a fool-
Irish Proverb

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JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
1 posted 2012-07-27 07:05 AM


Nice, very nice.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2012-07-27 07:18 AM


That is the fate of love-tossed relationships. Hang in there.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Nigelinoz
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since 2012-07-24
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Victoria,Australia
3 posted 2012-07-27 07:24 AM


Thank You JL and JerryPat2 for your very nice comments,I'm really starting to love this site,the comments I receive have really made me feel welcome.
Thanks Again.
Cheers'
N'oz

You may as well give cherries to a pig as give advice to a fool-
Irish Proverb

Startime1955
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since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada
4 posted 2012-07-27 03:17 PM


The sweet sound of the voice os someone you love is amazing and you have captured it well here...well done...both of you have my best wishes...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

Nigelinoz
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since 2012-07-24
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Victoria,Australia
5 posted 2012-07-28 04:25 AM


Thank you Startime1955,
I have to admit this long distance relationship is hard going but we are working on it and are committed to making it work.
Thanks for your kindness.
Cheers
N'oz

You may as well give cherries to a pig as give advice to a fool-
Irish Proverb

suthern
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6 posted 2012-08-01 11:18 AM


It's hard when your heart is miles away... even harder when time zones have to be calculated. *S* Wishing you luck... enjoyed the write!
JamesMichael
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7 posted 2012-08-07 01:49 AM


Wonderful romantic writing...James
Nigelinoz
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since 2012-07-24
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Victoria,Australia
8 posted 2012-08-07 02:32 AM


Thank you suthern and James for your lovely comments,they are much appreciated.
Cheers
N'oz

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