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icebox
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since 2003-05-03
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in the shadows

0 posted 2012-07-25 12:30 PM





tide reveals seashells

abandoned in time's passing

life's hardened moments


©2012 by icebox








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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
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So. El Monte, California
1 posted 2012-07-25 02:00 PM


These few words speak volumes, Charlie.
                                Ida

Startime1955
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since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada
2 posted 2012-07-25 06:21 PM


Oh yes...it has been so long since I went walking when the tide is out...love it...brought back memories...thank you...*BIG HUGS*...I took what I love from this poem and found joy for myself...

*may our dreams ever be magical*

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14
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California U.S.A
3 posted 2012-07-26 12:23 PM


within hardened shell
nacre of pearl
envelops the pain
through time to reveal
the iridescent luster
of wisdom

Ms. E

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
4 posted 2012-07-26 05:21 PM


Oh this is so nice, you combined the elements and the passing of time so beautifully!

Good on ya, icebox~

latearrival
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since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499
Florida
5 posted 2012-07-29 05:15 PM


Hardened sea shells as hardened hearts come along with the passage of time. But ocean waves bring clean sweeps and signs of change along with fresh shells and other bits of interest.   jo
MICHELMAS
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since 2012-02-15
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Lancashire England
6 posted 2012-07-30 03:54 AM


And how eventually the shells become the sands of time
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
7 posted 2012-07-30 07:28 AM


so true...love the replies also.

M

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