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Nigelinoz
Member

since 2012-07-24

Posts 71
Victoria,Australia

0 posted 2012-07-25 07:22 AM

Tonight as I lay sleeping,dreaming
The light came through my window
A shaft of moonlight ,beaming
Moonlight embracing me,
Dreams which were chasing me
Chasing me,pacing me, thoughts of you
Raced in me.

Thoughts of you laying so close by my side
Thoughts of you saying there is no need to hide
Thoughts of your kisses and cuddles and hugs
As we lay together,all cosy warm and snug

Thoughts of you stayed with me
As sleep softly played with me
And then I was gone ,gone back to sleep
In my dream,I missed you ,and started to weep

You may as well give cherries to a pig as give advice to a fool-
Irish Proverb

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-07-25 08:07 AM

Ah, a dream within a dream and a very good dream at that, until sleep overcome it and you were left alone. Drat.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

2 posted 2012-07-25 06:17 PM

Romance flows from your heart...dreaming of the one you love is beauty itself...well done...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

Nigelinoz
Member

since 2012-07-24

Posts 71
Victoria,Australia

3 posted 2012-07-25 06:23 PM

Thank you to JerryPat2 and Startime1955 for your lovely comments,with your support I hope my work will get better and better.
Kind Regards
N'oz

You may as well give cherries to a pig as give advice to a fool-
Irish Proverb

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2012-07-28 12:07 PM

Wonderful romantic stuff...James

Nigelinoz
Member

since 2012-07-24

Posts 71
Victoria,Australia

5 posted 2012-07-28 03:26 AM

Thank you so much James for your lovely comment,I appreciate all comments about my work and I very much value your thoughts.
Thank You
Cheers
N'oz

You may as well give cherries to a pig as give advice to a fool-
Irish Proverb

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

6 posted 2012-07-28 05:15 AM

I'm enjoying your poetry, Nigel!
Well done,
Ms. E

Nigelinoz
Member

since 2012-07-24

Posts 71
Victoria,Australia

7 posted 2012-07-28 05:20 AM

Thank you for that lovely comment Ms E ,I've read a lot of your work and enjoyed it immensely so your praise is humbling.
Thank You Kindly
Cheers
N'oz

You may as well give cherries to a pig as give advice to a fool-
Irish Proverb

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