Days Apart from My Sweetheart

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Open Poetry #48

Days Apart from My Sweetheart

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2012-07-23 10:34 PM

Days Apart From My Sweetheart

If you love a woman
you'll wait for her
but everyone has a
breaking point...
a time when weaknesses
are revealed
and no man can
wait forever...

because

to a man in love
even a day away
from the woman
that he loves
can seem like
forever.

JamesLee
22July
2012

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-07-24 06:06 AM

You are so right, James.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Nigelinoz
Member

since 2012-07-24

Posts 71
Victoria,Australia

2 posted 2012-07-24 07:20 AM

You are speaking to my heart with that one James,being apart from a loved on can be like hell on earth.
Cheers
N'oz

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 2012-07-24 12:44 PM

to a man in love
even a day away
from the woman
that he loves
can seem like
forever.

Amen to that! And the reverse is true, also! *S* Enjoyed this!

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

4 posted 2012-07-26 10:46 PM

it does indeed 'seem like forever' !

especially when in limerance (the 'first bright sting of love) !

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2012-08-04 08:27 PM

Thank you Jerry, Nigel, suthern and secondhand for the wonderful responses...James

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