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Professor Gloom
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of Depression

0 posted 2012-07-23 05:35 PM



What will this coming night bring,
That within the darkness birds sing
And laughter come bursting through a window,
Far off thunder begins to sound
But sooner a glad shelter is found
Away from streetlights searching shadow.
The song sweet no longer comes
As the rain begins to slowly drum,
She answers the door with a smile
Invites me inside to stay for a while
Till the rain leaves that has just begun.
I give a kiss to the lovely sight
And hope it rains all the night.

Gloom

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JamesMichael
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1 posted 2012-07-23 10:41 PM


Sound like a plan...James
ebonygirl
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2 posted 2012-07-24 11:27 AM


Yes Prof. Gloom, may it rain all night.
Enjoyed, Ms. E

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3 posted 2012-07-24 01:06 PM


Invites me inside to stay for a while
Till the rain leaves that has just begun.
I give a kiss to the lovely sight
And hope it rains all the night.

Wishing you a frog-strangling downpour! *S* I really like this!!

Marchmadness
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4 posted 2012-07-24 01:11 PM


Nothing like a little convenient rain to set the scene for a lovely poem, Professor.
                               Ida

Startime1955
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since 2012-04-22
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Alberta, Canada
5 posted 2012-07-24 05:56 PM


LOL...Oh my did you ever plan that one right...great read...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
6 posted 2012-07-24 09:17 PM


your day sounded alot better than my "stormy" one...


M

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