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A New Day |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada 
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A New Day In the shade of thirsty trees a light breeze caressing skin Word is a little cooler today from the days just past Still early morning is sweet when no one else is about I can sit and make myself one with nature around me Young crows call out to be fed their noise is complained about I find them interesting with unseen intelligence Loyal to each family and the murder of their choice Watching parents train their young touches my soul so deeply Silence of nature enfolds filling me with harmony I breathe deep the scented air sighing with sweet contentment The sun peaks through shading trees giving hint of heat to come Its touch is tender on face lifted to greet a new day Karen Mc Neil July 20, 2012 *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
"Word is a little cooler today from the days just past Still early morning is sweet when no one else is about I can sit and make myself one with nature around me" I really liked these lines, Karen. I liked the poems entirety, but especially those lines. ~*~ they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Enjoyed the embrace of your new day. Ms. E |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
Thank you, Jerry...I really experienced it, so I just had to put it to words...*BIG HUGS* Ms. E> I am glad you like my new day...I always look forward to your comments ...*BIG HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Still early morning is sweet when no one else is about I can sit and make myself one with nature around me What a peaceful scene you write... I drifted right into it with you! *S* |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Karen, you described my mornings and my late afternoons.Lovely.Thank you,. jo |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
*S*...'Drifted'...what a wonderful way to describe it...I will need to use that word...I am glad you liked it...*BIG HUGS* jo...I am so glad you start and finish your days like this...to me there is nothing so soothing...*BIG HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I find crows to be very interesting and intelligent also. I enjoyed this little scene very much. Ida |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
fine writing...a pleasure to read...James |
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