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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2012-07-18 10:30 PM



Forgiven


Transgressions

melting away,

like the morning mist

under the heat

of the sun,

when you

are forgiven.


JamesLee
17July
2012

    

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Startime1955
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since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada
1 posted 2012-07-18 11:24 PM


I believe that Forgiveness makes us softer inside and more understanding...I need to forgive and fine happiness as I forgive...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14
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2 posted 2012-07-19 02:32 AM


Enjoyed your poem, James.
Ms. E

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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New Brunswick Canada
3 posted 2012-07-19 03:21 AM


Right on James and we all need forgiveness from time to time.
Eric

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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since 2003-10-26
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Watertown, NY
4 posted 2012-07-19 03:56 AM


Its hard to forgive someone, but I find it makes you stronger. Enjoyed.

-Trina
I'll keep these dreams hidden
inside these eyes of mine
until my tears fall
unto my tainted hear

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana
5 posted 2012-07-19 05:18 AM


True, James.

~*~ they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

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6 posted 2012-07-19 08:51 AM


How very true! Sometimes, forgetting isn't possible and we continue to flay ourselves... but knowing we're forgiven makes a monumental difference. *S*
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