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Open Poetry #48

Drunk Lovers

Mojo
New Member

since 2012-07-17

Posts 1

0 posted 2012-07-17 09:40 PM

Drunk Lovers.

It seams I had forgotten
How to really belly laugh.
Until you and me staggered,
Down the drunken street.
You were laughing and trying to kiss me,
I was trying to hold you up and not pee my pants.

Later, you dark eyes inches from mine,
We lay together in the quiet night,
I remember and smile

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

1 posted 2012-07-18 02:36 AM

Your poem brought on a smile.
Welcome to pip, enjoyed your words.
Ms. E

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2012-07-18 05:40 AM

Oh, I can relate.

~*~ they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2012-07-18 10:45 AM

Mojo,

Welcome to Passions.

Please check your email
for a Very Special Greeting!

"The business of the poet...is to show the sorriness underlying the grandest things and the grandeur underlying the sorriest things." Thomas Hardy

Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2012-07-18 11:31 AM

That was a lovely introduction. Welcome to Passions.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2012-07-20 07:45 PM

Nice romantic stuff...James

Scooter
Member

since 2012-07-10

Posts 68

6 posted 2012-07-29 12:26 PM

I guess we have all been there. You said it all . . .

I was born when she kissed me,
I lived a few weeks when she loved me,
I died when she left me.

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

7 posted 2012-07-30 10:38 PM

Made me smile. Nothing like a good belly laugh, and then having a moment together.

Oh yea!!

Very cool writing, Mojo~

*welcome*

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