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Open Poetry #48

You Let me In

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

0 posted 2012-07-15 10:48 PM

Hope its ok for me to stay
Linger and stretch
Just for a bit
Not to invade your space
But to relish in your essence
To take in the whole of it all
Feeling your fingers caressing my spine
As your lids grow heavy while I caress
Your face … your hair…. Your chest
Whisper sweet dreams as I silently
Slip away

Thank You
~~~Connie~~~

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

1 posted 2012-07-15 10:54 PM

This poem is tender with a wonderful vision...I saw and felt it...great job, Connie...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

2 posted 2012-07-16 03:01 AM

Loving and gentle,
Enjoyed,
Ms. E

Donovan Callinan
Junior Member

since 2010-08-01

Posts 37
Omaha, Nebraska U.S.

3 posted 2012-07-16 09:18 AM

Pretty cool. Been there before.

Marilyn
Member Elite

since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2012-07-16 10:13 AM

I loved this, warm and soft, but when I got yo the slipping away a cold shiver ran down my spine.

Well done.

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