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Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

0 posted 2012-07-15 10:39 PM

Nature’s Splendor

A soft summer day comes to an end
Cumulus clouds gather this evening
Slowly the sun begins to descend
Setting clouds afire with color
Reds, oranges, and yellows paint the sky
My soul rejoices at the splendor
Nature’s miracles fill my spirit
I smile from inside as peace warms me
Eyes light with pleasure as I watch
Stunning beauty of Mountain Sunset
Peace and serenity join my dreams
Where he joins me in nature’s splendor

Karen Mc Neil
July 15, 2012

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

1 posted 2012-07-15 10:52 PM

love this piece....
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Peace and serenity join my dreams
Where he joins me in nature’s splendor
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bittersweet

Thank You
~~~Connie~~~

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

2 posted 2012-07-16 02:21 AM

wonderful scene and poetry, enjoyed a lot

yann

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

3 posted 2012-07-16 02:45 AM

"My soul rejoices at the splendor
Nature’s miracles fill my spirit"

Enjoying your poetry, Karen.
My soul also rejoices!
Ms. E

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2012-07-16 07:20 AM

You make my inner man sing when I get to read one of your poems, Karen, so simple, so wonderful.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

5 posted 2012-07-16 08:28 AM

ABSOLUTELY superb !!!
(simply magnificent 'word-painted' imagery)

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

6 posted 2012-07-16 08:54 AM

You've painted a lovely, serene picture here, Karen.
Ida

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

7 posted 2012-07-16 01:57 PM

Connie...never loss hope...one needs to be open to love to receive and give it...*BIG HUGS*

Yann...I try to paint what I see with words...I am glad you were abel to see it...*BIG HUGS*

Ms. E...Isn't nature wonderful...it brings such beauty and peace to our souls...*BIG HUGS*

Jerry...*BIG HUGS* my friend...I am glad...

Bruce...I am truely delighted when you respond to my poems...your poetry is of such quality I feel very complimented...Thank You...**BIG HUGS**

Ida...I am glad you felt the serenity of it...that is how I feel viewing it...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

Namyh
Senior Member

since 2009-01-20

Posts 988

8 posted 2012-07-18 05:45 PM

Startime - Now you've gone and done it. Just when I was in need of that 'warm fuzzy feeling', you knighted the day with this poetic one and I thank you for it. The visuals show your craft Karen. Enjoyed. Namyh

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