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Startime1955
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0 posted 2012-07-13 11:33 PM


Parallel Paths

Summer’s still young filled with happy dreaming
The forest still calls in its timeless way
Paths still wait in silent expectation
Trees stand guard whispering to each other
The wishing well awaits the spoken word
Twilight descends with a tender caress
Stars sing and light the ebony heavens
The moon looking down with a grinning smile
Two hearts tread the same path where they converge
Love is generated by once strangers
Who took a journey of parallel paths
Summer’s still young with winter far away

Karen Mc Neil
July 13, 2012



© Copyright 2012 Karen Mc Neil - All Rights Reserved
secondhanddreampoet
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1 posted 2012-07-14 12:54 PM


Fine imagery and Romanticism !!
JerryPat2
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2 posted 2012-07-14 06:15 AM


You are second to none, Karen, in composing these nature uplifting love pomes.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Startime1955
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3 posted 2012-07-14 08:13 AM


secondhanddreampoet
Bruce,I receive your compliment with pleasure...**BIG HUGS**

Jerry
Thank you, my friend...those are two topics that fill my desires...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2012-07-14 10:25 AM


Remembering, smiling


M

Startime1955
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5 posted 2012-07-14 03:19 PM


nakdthoughts
ah yes...I too remember and smile...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

tonyV
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6 posted 2012-07-14 03:21 PM


Just lovely and very fitting.
Startime1955
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7 posted 2012-07-14 03:47 PM


tonyV
Thank you for your kind words...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

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