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Professor Gloom
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of Depression

0 posted 2012-07-13 03:48 PM



In a pool of hubris  brown and green,
Life was not as fun as it had once been,
Itchy scabs oozed when scratched
Thoughts and sights seldom matched
The  music was some forgotten tune
That gave a desire to howl at the moon.
Moaning on blue sheets with a red stain
Nothing ventured, nothing gained.

Gloom

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2012-07-13 04:12 PM


I'm so glad you were thinking of me
when you wrote this!

Good to see you!


Zinsser
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2 posted 2012-07-13 04:18 PM


To howl again
At the moon when for long
Been in gloom
At least is inspiration

Far from you
I see the same moon
And howl in pain
Not in vain
For answers to
the oozing sores
That never seem to heal

Professor Gloom
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3 posted 2012-07-13 04:38 PM


My dear Sunshine, never thought of you as a witch
Although you are quite enchanting.

As for you, Zinsser, always a pleasure to inspire.

Gloom

Sunshine
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4 posted 2012-07-13 04:39 PM



Startime1955
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5 posted 2012-07-13 07:27 PM


You write the way I feel sometimes but can't put it in words...thank you...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

Marchmadness
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6 posted 2012-07-14 09:39 PM


Pretty gloomy, Professor Gloom. I like your style.
                               Ida

ebonygirl
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7 posted 2012-07-15 02:15 AM


There is always some adventure when a witch
is involved, Professor Gloom,
Enjoyed your poem!
Ms. E

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8 posted 2012-08-05 03:20 PM


A treat to read your poetry.  I like it and that's enough said.

A

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9 posted 2012-08-20 09:04 AM


PG Always a pleasure and a treat to read your words. Really enjoyed this delicious dish x

Love and warm stuff
as always
Mushy
x x x x x x x

Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds
but I can face the future with courage brave and bold

Footprints In My Heart
Kethry

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