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secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
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0 posted 2012-07-13 10:44 AM


            Roads

While walking this road
of misty twilight alone
in the fading footsteps
  of truth and time,
I chanced upon a
lovely one in similar
  journey
on a different road
in parallel for the ‘now.’
The very hardest
truth lies simply
in the knowing
that all my love
may never
make a difference.
Winter comes
  invisibly.

         --- b. e. a. (7/13/2012)


© Copyright 2012 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2012-07-13 11:37 AM


"that all my love
may never
make a difference."

I understand and relate, Bruce.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
2 posted 2012-07-13 12:33 PM


Unfortunately I can relate as well. Nice job
Startime1955
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since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada
3 posted 2012-07-13 02:06 PM


I believe love always makes a difference...when two walk the same roads they must meet to smile across at each other and maybe their roads will connect...tender are your words...beautifully written...**BIG HUGS**

*may our dreams ever be magical*

Namyh
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since 2009-01-20
Posts 988

4 posted 2012-07-13 07:41 PM


secondhdp - When people travel on parallel lonely roads and meet, often Love makes all the difference to make their paths converge. Interesting thoughts generated by this work. I enjoyed. Namyh
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2012-07-22 02:07 AM


Nice...James
Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
6 posted 2012-07-25 02:08 PM


There's all kinds of love,Bruce and I believe that somewhere down the line it always makes a difference.
                                Ida

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