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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2012-07-13 07:00 AM



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darkness doth pervade the land
the sea roils 'neath its might
a black angel conducts powerful symphony
his bloody design put into place

conception's absurdity is predetermined
infinity has revolving doors
enduring virtuous taste is wickedly tainted

compassion laced, justice hunters faux seek
by slothful, unearthing injustice
deceiving even themselves the errors of their ways
future generations are left the lies

the creation, then
brought on by an ego unsurpassed, but suspect
has given rise to hate, blood and carnage
which the little word "love" cannot prevent
surely He knew that

©June 17, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

© Copyright 2012 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved
Startime1955
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since 2012-04-22
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Alberta, Canada
1 posted 2012-07-13 09:25 AM


Personally...I believe HE did know and it was part of the overall plan...I love how you wrote this poem, my friend...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !
2 posted 2012-07-13 10:49 AM


VERY powerful 'write' !!

MUCH applause from this humble street
corner in Time's fugacious whimsy amid
the 'Runaway American Dream'

JerryPat2
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3 posted 2012-07-13 11:24 AM


Karen, you might be right. Thank you for you nice thoughts.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2012-07-13 11:27 AM


Appreciate the comments in the middle of that American Dream, Bruce.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

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