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Startime1955
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since 2012-04-22
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Alberta, Canada

0 posted 2012-07-12 06:23 PM


Acceptance

Gossamer clouds sent the message
Understanding fills heart and soul
A dream a vision now vanished

Yet the peace of forest remains
Secret paths still lead to the well
Hope lives forever eternal

The music of the stars still twinkle
From velvet sky of ebony
Someday hearts will walk the same path

Souls will reach out to each other
While weaving magic of desire
Wind will rejoice through the pine trees

Fireflies will dance like fairies
And the valley will receive two
Who have searched the endless cosmos

Understanding with acceptance
Brings peace and balance from within
And a gentle smile lights the face

Karen Mc Neil
July 12, 2012


*may our dreams ever be magical*

© Copyright 2012 Karen Mc Neil - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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1 posted 2012-07-12 06:32 PM


This is just beautiful, Karen.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Startime1955
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Alberta, Canada
2 posted 2012-07-12 06:34 PM


Thank you, Jerry...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2012-07-12 11:18 PM


Nice...James
MICHELMAS
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since 2012-02-15
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Lancashire England
4 posted 2012-07-13 04:07 AM


The inevitable meeting of souls

Michael

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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New Brunswick Canada
5 posted 2012-07-13 08:06 PM


Karen
I love the beautiful positiveness of this write and yet it's elements of sad are still entwined in the threads of hope.
The metaphors of nature are well expressed.

Great work!

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

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