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Open Poetry #48

Until Eternity

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2012-07-11 11:30 PM

Until Eternity

In the mall
a lovely woman
wearing a red dress
walked right by me.
She could have
been a model
a picture perfect face,
her red dress
fitting nicely
with every curve in place...
I noticed her
she never acknowledged me
if I don't loosen up my standards
I might be single until eternity.

JamesLee
11July
2012

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-07-12 07:16 AM

Hah! You're beginning to get the picture, James.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2012-07-12 04:36 PM

He he hard to change our basic personality sometimes.
Rejection is a scary thing.
Good writing.

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

3 posted 2012-07-12 06:33 PM

Oh oh...I don't think you will be alone through eternity...keep hope alive...one never knows what tomorrow will bring...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

MICHELMAS
Member

since 2012-02-15

Posts 305
Lancashire England

4 posted 2012-07-13 04:11 AM

there is someone out there for everyone

Michael

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

5 posted 2012-07-13 10:51 AM

I absolutely LOVE 'slice of life' impressionism/Romanticism!

fine 'write' !!

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