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luminosity
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0 posted 2012-07-10 01:28 PM


Lord, I know today
I am going to ask for more than
usual, but  today,
...at least today Lord
remind me with each step I take
to be thankful for my legs
with each breath I take
to be thankful I am alive.

I know we have paved
too much of this earth
but when Your creations press up and out
reaching towards your beautiful blue heavens
brilliant shades
on fragile petals
Lord, remind me to lift my heart
upward as well.

And Lord?
When that familiar all too easy irritation
creeps in,
when that person who cut me off,
or  the one I have to help, again and again,
or my partner who....ah, I shall stop there
and just plead
that You remind me
that I am just as they are
a creation of yours,
and Lord remind me
that I am a recipient of your
Grace and Mercy
too.

[This message has been edited by luminosity (07-10-2012 03:10 PM).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2012-07-10 02:16 PM


Aha...so today I have received two.

Blessings, that is. One was when a [gentle]man
walked into the office, wearing grungy overalls,
scraggly beard, much dirt under his fingernails
and basically dirty all over, and said,

"Blessings on you, gal. Is the boss-lady here?"

I knew to expect a man by a certain name,
asked him if he was Mr. So, he said yes,
I rang up the boss-lady, voila, all was done.

Until he left, and he blessed me again.

That was my first blessing today.

Reading your poem was my second.




luminosity
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2 posted 2012-07-10 02:53 PM


ah lady thank you, and yeppers, the blessing are there, they just need to be regarded as such  

[This message has been edited by luminosity (07-10-2012 05:58 PM).]

JerryPat2
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3 posted 2012-07-10 05:21 PM


I think it is wonderful to have your faith as strong as you have yours, luminosity.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (07-10-2012 06:03 PM).]

Sunshine
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4 posted 2012-07-10 05:35 PM


I love the photo!




ebonygirl
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5 posted 2012-07-10 10:33 PM


Thank you Luminosity for your wonderful
reminder!
Ms. E

Startime1955
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6 posted 2012-07-10 11:01 PM


A prayer to go into heart and soul reminding us all to be thankful...I love it...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

suthern
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7 posted 2012-07-11 09:09 AM


Oh, my goodness!!!! *S* Remind me to come back and read the poem... right now, I'm loving seeing my pal's pic! *S*

Woo-HOO!!! *S*

luminosity
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8 posted 2012-07-11 03:01 PM


jerry thank  you, I thought I was illuminating my weaknesses and instead you read deeper and saw faith.....thank you

sunshine, lol, bout time I showed my face round here...

eg, thank you! we need daily reminders it seems so easy to get busy and forget

star, thank you...hugs back

suthern...lol...well its a pic from 3 years ago but my glasses haven't changed, my hair hasn't grown and I still wear that same shirt, so I guess it counts as a current photo......lolol
thank you lady

ethome
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9 posted 2012-07-12 05:05 PM


Yep, I agree.
Sometimes we take too much for granted or think the world revolves around us.
However we're just frail little human beings that have been rewarded with the marvelous gift of life.
You're right, we should always count our blessings.
Loved this.

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

suthern
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10 posted 2012-07-17 11:57 AM


We focus on the hardships and forget to see the blessings.... We all need reminders and this is such a beautiful one!!
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