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Wishing Well
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Wishing Well |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada 
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Wishing well Walking the ancient forest path enjoying the warmth of sunlight filtering through sentinel trees guarding the timeless passageway taken by lovers as they search Deep within majestic mountains there is a place whispered about in legends almost forgotten where only the sincere can find when searching for eternal love A quiet valley ever green to never know winters chill nestled within the mystic hills all nature gathers together in peace directed by the Gods A stream snakes through silent valley nourishing wildlife and flowers rabbits, deer, bear and cougars share a place where death does not exist waiting for humans to enter It’s not easy to find this place so few even believe the truth belong to a different world where daily life makes the heart deaf to the sweet magic given to them Following the hearts beaten path to a valley serenely set with natures natural wonders while a steam sparkles with power and takes you to loves’ Wishing Well Karen Mc Neil July 5, 2012 *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wow, sounds like a lovely place of peace and contentment. love the truth in these words. "where only the sincere can find when searching for eternal love" You painted such calm serene visions in this place of never ending love. Keep up the good work. Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
You make it all sound so wonderful, Karen, it is comparable to the legend of El Dorado. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
It sounds like it's worth every step of the journey! *S* This is beautiful!! |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
My lord, Karen, love your vision of the Wishing Well! Ms. E |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hi startime, loved it very much, so persuasive and penentrating words, and above all a look at complexity of the world, A stream snakes through silent valley nourishing wildlife and flowers rabbits, deer, bear and cougars share a place where death does not exist waiting for humans to enter It’s not easy to find this place so few even believe the truth belong to a different world where daily life makes the heart deaf to the sweet magic given to them thanks yann |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
You found that place, Karen, and we all followed you. A paradise indeed! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Yes, indeed, Karen. Lovely. ida |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
Eric This place is where my soul goes to heal...I am glad you like it...I am able to bring it to life in my mind...*BIG HUGS* What a wonderful compliment, Jerry...Thank you...*BIG HUGS* suthern...A wonderful journey we all can take...Thank you...*BIG HUGS* Ms E. *grin* I am glad you like it...*BIG HUGS* Yann...Yes it is so sad that our eyes no longer see paradise...*BIG HUGS* Honey Bunch...It is my dream that "If you can dream it, you can do it"...I want to create just a small piece of the world to ber like this...*BIG HUGS* ida...Wouldn't it be a wonderful world if more people tried to see such beauty...*BIG HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
This is super poem, loved the land you’ve been to and thanks for taking us there. Equilibrium and peace! "The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts" |
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