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passing shadows
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0 posted 2012-07-03 03:13 PM



I guess there are times in every poet's life
where times get in the way of mood,
where certain cocoons make her seclude,
tornadoes roar through to make her unglued-
or even just the stillness of it all
turns thoughts into food,
and though the darkness holds no voices
there is a harrowing feud
where the meaning of life
gets misconstrued...

where she has to find herself
before she can ever be alone,
before her head can be viewed,
before her heart is renewed
and she makes her way home.



A poem begins with a lump in the throat.
~Robert Frost

© Copyright 2012 Dixie Lee Bullington - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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1 posted 2012-07-03 03:54 PM


Yes to all that you said, passing shadows. Cocoons and tornadoes are all an evil part of a poet's life. Still, after the cocoons and tornadoes have swept through our thoughts we are able to see more clearly and projects our thought more understandable than before, so the evil turns into a Godsend.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Michael
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2 posted 2012-07-03 05:19 PM


It's a strange feeling when one can view themselves abstractly... and even stranger the truths they behold from that vantage point.  You can still go home after that, but it's never the same.     Enjoyable read.


Michael

Startime1955
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3 posted 2012-07-03 06:50 PM


You always have a way of hitting the nail on the head..."A Poet's Life" indeed...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

secondhanddreampoet
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4 posted 2012-07-03 11:12 PM


The only 'curse' truly worse than being a 'poet' is likely also being a secular humanist and environmentalist ...
all of whom are likely taken far less seriously than professional turnip jugglers by 'the world' !

ethome
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5 posted 2012-07-04 03:44 PM


Well, Jerry summed that up quite well.
Love the in depth search from your perceptive.
A good read to create fodder for thinking.

Eric

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6 posted 2012-07-04 03:47 PM


passing shadows - It seems that we poets write from both our pains and our pleasures turning them into words that give the same consolation as a priest who hears confession, a surgeon who heals a pain or a mechanic who replaces a broken part. Perhaps therein lies the reason why people look into our poetic windows to catch a glimse of Beauty, Love, Truth and Duty etc. with a hope that some of it might just rub off. It isn't blood that flows in our poet's veins. It's ink, hopefully of the indelible kind that even helps renew a poet's heart trying to get home. Much enjoyed PS. Namyh

passing shadows
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7 posted 2012-07-04 10:04 PM


thank you each for these great replies

I am glad you enjoyed this top-of-the-head write... it's a little of what I've gone through in these many months of not really being here

I remember getting on here the moment I opened my eyes in the morning till I closed them again at night. Hope I get that inspiration back in between this lovely thing called Facebook and its never-ending games



ebonygirl
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8 posted 2012-07-05 04:07 AM


A poet's life is always evolving, for sure.
Enjoyed your poem.
Ms. E

JamesMichael
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9 posted 2012-07-05 07:37 PM


Enjoyed reading this...James
luminosity
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10 posted 2012-07-10 05:07 PM


smiling, nicely written...and yes I think we are much alike dear lady...good to see you writing again
passing shadows
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11 posted 2012-07-18 09:56 PM


thanks to everyone

smiling brightly

Scooter
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12 posted 2012-07-27 08:41 PM


It's that old saying, what goes around comes around, is what I think you were getting at here in your own adept way, passing shadows, and you did a good job of it.


I was born when she kissed me,
I lived a few weeks when she loved me,
I died when she left me.

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13 posted 2012-07-28 10:38 AM


...as always....





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