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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada 
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Eternal Seconds turn to minutes minutes then turn to hours hours take us into days days to weeks, weeks to months months to years time goes on Love is sought then is shared shared in words spoken true true from the open heart heart filled with tranquil thoughts thoughts from a quiet mind Feelings begin to grow grow as nature designs designs from cosmic plans plans made to help mankind mankind drawn together Two hearts join in the dance dance timeless melodies melodies from the stars stars smiling down on those those whose Love’s Eternal Karen Mc Neil July 2, 2012 *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
"Eternal" is love's promise. The stars we see in our lover's eyes are merely us staring back into our own, even as our lover is staring at their eyes looking back. This is the eternalness of love, two hearts, one love. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Lovely writing Karen. Eternal is a good way to look at it and based on the stars. An interesting thing about the stars; If you consult an astrologer he will tell you the stars have a direct effect on you and then try and sell you a book or something similar to predict your future. But, if you talk to an astronomer he will tell you that even travelling at a speed of 186,000 miles per second that the light from those stars won't reach you in your lifetime. They are so distant that the light you see has been generated before you were born. So, that leaves the stars where they should be, up high in our universe as a romantic thing of beauty. Love your warm hearted work. Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Love IS eternal. I'll stand by that statement... no matter how we humans may tend to screw it up, till we're left with nothing but the feeling. But it's magical while shared, too... and that makes it all worthwhile. Michael |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
Jerry "two hearts, one love"What a great way to put it...*BIG HUGS* Eric I have always loved star gazing...even in the early spring I lay on my back to watch a meteor shower...I may be 57 but I still find magic in many things and the stars are just one of them...*grin* part of me will never grow up because I still make the time to find beauty in life...*BIG HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
Michael I am with you there...no matter what hope grows in the heart...Love remains Eternal...thanks for commenting...*BIG HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very lovely ponderings around eternal love, dear Karen. Yes Love, being the motor of life, is eternal, it's our awareness of it that seems to have its limits. Margherita |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful thoughts on love...James |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
The poetic time flows upon a masterful piece uponn enjoying every second of your verse's message. |
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