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Open Poetry #48

transience

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2012-07-02 11:03 AM

              transience

The beautiful woman in this
  bookstore window ...
these fast-bright tomes
that portend to dispense
a dose of latest 'wisdom'
  or escape
from the crush of our humanity ...
All is transience, change and
  endless motion
on ... and of ... this
fragile 'lifeship' planet
spinning through a boundless
cosmic dream and galactic dance
of infinite 'Deep-Time' uncertainty.

                 --- b.e.adams (7/2/2012)

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-07-02 11:15 AM

Yeah, you said a mouthful here, Bruce, transience is as transience does, and one thing it does not do is stand still for you, me, or anybody no matter your station in life.

Stand and take yet another bow, clap.clap., bravo time for this . . . "galactic dance / of infinite 'Deep-Time' uncertainty."

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

2 posted 2012-07-02 12:05 PM

*sigh* I don't know why everything has to be so brief...I still have hope that eternal love exists...to dance among the stars would be a wonderful way to show timeless love...as usual your poem inspires me...**BIG HUGS**

*may our dreams ever be magical*

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

3 posted 2012-07-04 12:04 PM

You always create magic, whether on our world or in the cosmos, Bruce.
Ida

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2012-07-04 05:45 PM

You say it so beautifully, dear Bruce! This cosmic dance is the most fascinating dance we can conceive!

Margherita

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