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Open Poetry #48
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noodles6996
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since 2012-06-16
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0 posted 2012-07-01 05:53 PM



Bleed my eyes and ring my ears
as i expel the remnants of that shade of green!
I'll move to the poles or somewhere far
maybe even the planet mars
somewhere red and black or pink and gray
as long as green cannot be seen.
I throb and cry as i slay the faceless fiend with green eyes.

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ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2012-07-01 07:36 PM


Well noodles you sure are expressing some hurt here.
Nice passion in the write, I enjoyed the read.
Welcome to PIP you'll enjoy your time here.

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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2 posted 2012-07-01 07:52 PM


welcome to PIP

impressive writing here! I don't care for green much either so sometimes I have to change my veiwpoint if there's too much of it around me


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