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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2012-06-30 08:20 PM



Little Bird

Little bird
stick around for awhile
and I'll give
you a smile
and some crumbs
from my peanut
butter cookies.
We'll probably
never meet again
but for this moment
I'll be your friend
and keep you company.

JamesLee
29June
2012


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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2012-06-30 08:28 PM


Friendship. It doesn't get much better than that. Nobody is obligated.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Startime1955
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since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada
2 posted 2012-06-30 09:19 PM


I really like this little bird...I love the little bird being a friend...*sigh* ...tooo cute...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

mvvenkataraman
Member
since 2011-11-12
Posts 72
India
3 posted 2012-07-01 07:56 AM


Superb observation really
Excellent friendship chosen
It won't show any gratitude
But, a tiny harmless soul

I am proud of this poet
His idea is indeed touching
Lovely little poem written
Cute like that little bird.

mvvenkataraman

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000
California U.S.A
4 posted 2012-07-01 10:15 AM


Friendship extends to all, including nature's gift of
animals. Very nice, Ms. E

luminosity
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since 2005-11-18
Posts 813

5 posted 2012-07-01 03:21 PM


I love the birds, feed them whenever I can yep love this poem too
ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
6 posted 2012-07-01 07:22 PM


Happens just like that James.
Very good I enjoyed your expression of friendship in this piece.

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
7 posted 2012-07-05 11:42 AM


There is peace and contentment in simple things. Oportunity for good writing also.
                             Ida

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
8 posted 2012-07-05 07:06 PM


Thank you Jerry, Startime, mvvenkataraman, ebonygirl, luminosity, ethome and Marchmadness for the wonderful responses...James
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