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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2012-06-25 10:41 PM



Hope Meets Reality


Hope is a desire
that works best
when two people
are equally attracted
and share
similar dreams.
Hope needs to
find reality
to live
in love.


JamesLee
24June
2012





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Startime1955
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since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072
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1 posted 2012-06-25 11:37 PM


*sigh* you are quite right...hope has to be shared by two people of similar interests and then reality can bring love together...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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2 posted 2012-06-26 06:33 AM


Yeah, I hear you James, but reality can sometimes sucker punch you.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000
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3 posted 2012-06-26 11:42 AM


Lol... "sucker punch", JP? Lol,
Enjoy your poem James.
Ms. E

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
4 posted 2012-06-26 01:46 PM


Well, yes, there is the odd sucker punch but without that hope where would dreams come from, the dreams you try to make come true.
Very nice James.

true love never looks after it's own interests

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105
Watertown, NY
5 posted 2012-06-27 02:25 PM


In the reality we live in now, all one can do is hope. Enjoyed.

-Trina
A weakened heart is far from innocent.

mvvenkataraman
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since 2011-11-12
Posts 72
India
6 posted 2012-07-01 08:08 AM


Nice expression made briefly
But, the power is severe
It has penetrated my heart
I understand its true beauty.

mvvenkataraman

passing shadows
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displaced
7 posted 2012-07-01 08:02 PM


very deep

I like it

Honeybunch
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8 posted 2012-07-02 08:39 AM


Yes, you're so right!  
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