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Amberzlynnc
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since 2010-08-24
Posts 229
New Jersey

0 posted 2012-06-22 12:59 PM



I want to roll around in chilly sand
Our tongues entwined and feet in salty tides
Strip off our clothes and run far from the land

We’ll reach the water’s edge in several strides
We’ll dive straight in with naked bodies free
Police will shine their lights and we won’t hide

We’ll sink into the waves but we won’t flee
You live but once, so go a bit crazy!

-Amber

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2012-06-22 06:31 AM


Ab-so-lutely! Gotta love it . . .

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Nicole
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since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835
Florida
2 posted 2012-06-22 06:59 AM


Sure why not!  lol  Except for the sand maybe, that has a tendency to get in the most uncomfortable of places.  
Startime1955
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since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada
3 posted 2012-06-22 12:33 PM


What a wonderful thing to do...been there...done that...my favorite is in the ocean or under the forest trees in a hiden pond...great writing...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

Klassy Lassy
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since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187
Oregon
4 posted 2012-06-23 01:18 PM


You make me think of an oldie but goodie I heard on the radio a couple of days ago.

"Who put the bop in the bop-sh-bop-sh-bop? who put the dip in the dip-da-dip-da-dip? who put the ram in the ram-a-lamma-ding-dong?...Who was that man, I'd like to shake his ha-a-a-nd. He made my baby fall in love with me!"      

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