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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2012-06-21 07:16 AM


    

how could I forget Angie
or Dallas, Texas
or Jimmy and Angie's sister
I've forgotten her name
Angie had red hair
Jimmy and her sister lived together
they set me up with a blind date with Angie
the four of us went dancing
Angie and I melded into each other's arms
on that dance floor
some hope-to-hit-it-big country band
was kicking butt
had us clinging to each other
oblivious to everyone else
by the time Angie and I made it to my apartment
we had groped each other senseless
on that dance floor
Jimmy and her sister were long gone
we were on the sofa
having a nightcap and sucking
on each others tongues
after awhile I said, how about let's go into the bedroom?
she said, "You'll have to pick me up and carry me."
I said, huh?
she said it again
so what's a guy to do in a situation like that
right
I stood, gathered her into my arms
and we played house the rest of the night
Angie and I were an item after that
she was a good person
dynamite where it counts
we'd probably still be together
except for that terrible night
when her eight-year-old daughter
came into the room where we were and said
I'LL CALL THE POLICE!

©June 8, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton



~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (06-21-2012 12:04 PM).]

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ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14
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1 posted 2012-06-21 11:49 AM


Ooops, lol, enjoyed the poem JP.
Ms. E

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2012-06-21 12:01 PM


Haha! Yeah, you right, Ms. E, Ooops! it was. Thank you for being here.

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chourouk
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since 2012-05-29
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3 posted 2012-06-21 03:15 PM


I'm really enjoyed
Thank you for your poem.

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2012-06-21 03:17 PM


Thanks, chourouk, appreciate it.

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Startime1955
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since 2012-04-22
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5 posted 2012-06-21 03:52 PM


oh..oh...sounded like fun until the end...you sure get into some spots... ...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

JerryPat2
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6 posted 2012-06-21 04:10 PM


Yes, yes I do, or at least did, Karen, and that wasn't a fun spot . . . Thank you . . .

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