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Startime1955
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0 posted 2012-06-20 10:28 PM


Spring Ends

Azure skies – spring day
Floating clouds – day dream
Caress wind – send thoughts
Sunlight warms – eyes close
Vision forms – hope grows
Forest path – stroll shared
Twilight comes – hands held
Evening falls – stars shine
Moonlit dance – love shared
Solstice starts – spring ends

Karen Mc Neil
June 20, 2012

*may our dreams ever be magical*

© Copyright 2012 Karen Mc Neil - All Rights Reserved
niteismyday
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1 posted 2012-06-20 11:19 PM


WOW! What a beautiful arrangement of words, this really put a wonderful image into my mind. Thanks for sharing this.
ebonygirl
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2 posted 2012-06-21 03:08 AM


Very pretty, Star!
Ms. E

JerryPat2
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3 posted 2012-06-21 07:15 AM


To combine love and lovers within the confines of the changing season is cool.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

chourouk
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4 posted 2012-06-21 03:13 PM


Nice reading

Startime1955
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since 2012-04-22
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5 posted 2012-06-21 03:59 PM


niteismyday
I am so glad you got an image...I try to give my vision each time I write...thank you...*BIG HUGS*

Ms E. I am glad you liked it...*BIG HUGS*

Jerry
Thanks...it was a fun write...*BIG HUGS*

chourouk
Thanks for the pass...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

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