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Open Poetry #48
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niteismyday
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since 2012-06-19
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0 posted 2012-06-20 09:52 PM


Rain

Bullets from heaven
Create puddles on paved streets
Raining lullabies


Little Bird

Little bird, calling
From an empty nest he sees
Feathers fall from sky

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Startime1955
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since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada
1 posted 2012-06-20 10:30 PM


Well done...we had a rainstorm yesterday and hail came pounding as well...this poem made me see it all over again...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2012-06-21 07:11 AM


Nice work.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

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