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Huan Yi
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Waukegan

0 posted 2012-06-20 12:27 PM


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So finally
We’re sitting
In this lounge
Beside the bar
Of a restaurant
Somewhere in
Rhode Island

Outside beyond
The window
The sun
Has gone down
Stars have
Just begun
Io appear

It’s been
At least a year
Since we met at work
And here we are after hours
Of what passes for conversation
And nowhere being near

What beyond
The chance of sex
With a woman
Something thirty
Yet still having
What it takes  
Would make me
Want you regardless
Of your experience

With every man
With money to burn
Who wants to come
Your way


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jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
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Spring, Texas
1 posted 2012-06-20 08:48 PM


enjoyed this, my friend ... the reality of it.

j.

Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan
2 posted 2012-06-20 10:39 PM


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Thanks Buddy


John


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Alison
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3 posted 2012-06-24 02:43 AM


This is interesting.  I have read it a few times and like it.

A

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