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Startime1955
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0 posted 2012-06-17 05:10 PM


Kindred Spirits

Walking a forest path where few feet have traveled
Sunlight dapples here and there through tall pines
The sounds of waking nature fill the ears with peace
Birds sing while baby birds cry to be fed

A rabbit hops across your path into foliage
Not stopping to see the smile light your face
Suddenly the path opens revealing a lake
Pristine its beauty on this spring morning

Beneath morning mist sounds of feeding fish echoes
Waking sounds vibrate off ancient mountains
Eagles soar aloft on air currents with wings spread
Squirrels chatter leaping from tree to tree

There he sits all alone among natures silence
She stands surveying the one her heart calls
He blends perfectly with the world surrounding him
In his arms they’re joined as kindred spirits

Karen Mc Neil
June 17, 2012

*may our dreams ever be magical*

© Copyright 2012 Karen Mc Neil - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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1 posted 2012-06-17 06:21 PM


Beautifully done, Karen,as always.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Namyh
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2 posted 2012-06-18 03:56 PM


Startime - Even in the midst of such vibrant spendor, there is Love. Kinda gives me the warm fuzzies, it does. Loved it. Namyh
Startime1955
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3 posted 2012-06-18 10:44 PM


Jerry
Thsnk you, Jerry, your comments are always welcome...*BIG HUGS*

Namyh
Warm fuzzies, eh...I'll take it...I am in the mood for warm fuzzies tonight...I am glad you love it and appreciate your comments...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

Oklahoma Rose
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4 posted 2012-06-19 08:59 AM


Startime, this is absolutely beautiful!
ebonygirl
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5 posted 2012-06-19 09:20 AM


Enjoyed walking the path to find love, Star.
Smiles, ms. e

Startime1955
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6 posted 2012-06-19 10:11 AM


Rose
Thank you so very much for such a compliment coming from you...*BIG HUGS*

Ms E.
Hope springs eternal...natures path is so beautiful...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

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