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Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa

0 posted 2012-06-15 04:02 AM


That gypsy unseen opened her heart
and for a moment thought she could fly
but no wings appeared to lift her up
into the sky of her only desire.

She studied her wagon and how it swayed
weighted down with her goods and chattels
and how the power that pulled her along
seemed no longer interested.

Still she moved going nowhere slowly
not ever stopping to look and to feel
and made her way to the river bank
intent on reaching the sea.

She’s still there today camped in dismay
and there within the pervading silence
she asks for the strength to pray
for those ever elusive wings.

But the trees had nothing to say
and the river still wends its way
down to the sea beyond the reach
of gypsies who cannot fly.

Sad to say the tale ends that way
but in the movement of rivers to sea
you’ll hear the prayers of that gypsy unseen
and you’ll know she’s stronger today!

Helen / 15 June 2012


© Copyright 2012 Helen - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2012-06-15 06:56 AM


Maybe she wasn't meant to have wings. Maybe she has other talent.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Startime1955
Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada
2 posted 2012-06-15 10:15 AM


Being stronger she will surely gain her wings...A total joy to read...you weave the Gypsy well...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
3 posted 2012-06-15 01:10 PM


All spirits have wings, and this gypsy definately has spirit.  She will have her flight.  Very enjoyable read, this.  I can feel the yearning.

Michael

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