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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2012-06-14 11:58 AM


           Wilderness and Love

      
Beneath a deep infinity
of white clouds dancing
  in an azure sea,
and amid these mist-wrapped
spectral rocks and trees
on this magnificent morn in Spring,
there is only peace, serenity,
joy, and freedom in a fine elixir
  of timelessness.
Here in the wilderness,
where a thousand paths
never reach the world,
sunlight lingers in the pines
to dance with shadows, thoughts,
and endless dreams ... of love.

                 --- b. e  adams (6/14/2012)


© Copyright 2012 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana
1 posted 2012-06-14 12:29 PM


Another simply outstanding piece of work from the master of love and environmentally strong poetry. These line "Here in the wilderness, / where a thousand paths / never reach the world," reached out and grabbed me. You are shining brightly these days, Bruce.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Startime1955
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since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada
2 posted 2012-06-14 02:59 PM


Ah...yes...you understand...this poem is simply beautiful in vision and feel...so good to be lost in vision woven so well...**BIG HUGS**

*may our dreams ever be magical*

[This message has been edited by Startime1955 (06-14-2012 06:17 PM).]

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2012-06-23 08:08 PM


Nice...James
Klassy Lassy
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since 2005-06-28
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4 posted 2012-06-23 08:28 PM


Nature can be so infinitely soothing at times.... I feel that in this blue sky poem with an evergreen soul. Some gifts are absolutely priceless in the balances of being.  
Prasad Nataraj
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since 2008-05-29
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5 posted 2012-06-24 01:45 AM


Fine writing, your visions and words are beautiful.Enjoyed.

"The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts"
prasadnatarajan5.blogspot.com/

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14
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California U.S.A
6 posted 2012-06-24 02:09 AM


"...on this magnificent morn in Spring,
there is only peace, serenity,
joy, and freedom in a fine elixir
of timelessness."
Love this 2ndhanddream,
Ms. E

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
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So. El Monte, California
7 posted 2012-06-24 08:46 AM


"Here in the wilderness where a thousand paths never reach the world" Love this thought, Bruce.
                               Ida

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
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South Africa
8 posted 2012-06-24 05:14 PM


Beautiful!
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