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Startime1955
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since 2012-04-22
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0 posted 2012-06-12 09:52 PM


Dreaming

A peaceful quiet fills the night
as the sky slowly turns from grey
to black velvet with gentle breeze
softly whispering to her heart

One by one stars blink into life
from horizon to horizon
the heavens come alive singing
back and forth an ancient chorus

The hearts of mortals recognize
music as old as time itself
and sang throughout eternity
for lovers strolling hand in hand

Their spirits feel eternal truths
of need of want and of desire
to search and find the soul who sings
the mystical songs from the stars

She gazes awed at the star-field
dreaming of one who sees and hears
natural wonders of this world
when seen through the eyes of romance

Karen Mc Neil
June 12, 2012


*may our dreams ever be magical*

© Copyright 2012 Karen Mc Neil - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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1 posted 2012-06-12 09:56 PM


"She gazes awed at the star-field
dreaming of one who sees and hears
natural wonders of this world
when seen through the eyes of romance"

Ah, that is you on a nutshell, Karen. I can get a bit more complicated, nothing, in my opinion is that black and white . . . Would that it could be, and hopefully I am wrong. You caught me just as I was getting ready to prepare for bed, my wine had been drank and I am happy with the world . . . at the moment.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Startime1955
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Alberta, Canada
2 posted 2012-06-12 10:52 PM


*sigh*...I know things are not black and white, Jerry but in my dreams I wish they were...the world is just so harsh without hope and belief in something magical...*grin* have a great sleep...I am glad all is right with your world...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

suthern
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3 posted 2012-06-20 09:39 AM


Beautiful and romantic... Reading this let me slip away from reality to a place of peace... where wishes come true... and I thoroughly enjoyed the visit! *S*
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