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ponderthepoetorrsx
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0 posted 2012-06-11 10:36 PM



the day is done
gone
gone
gone

though summer is a day

and winter is a night

but for me
for me
for me

summer is death

and winter is life

and i think
i contemplate
the listless days

as outside
darkness falls from the wings of night

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1 posted 2012-06-12 12:33 PM


and i think
i contemplate
the listless days

as outside
darkness falls from the wings of night

I really like this image!! It's already miserably hot here and listless has definitely set in. *S*

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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New Brunswick Canada
2 posted 2012-06-12 03:35 PM


Interesting concept and great images.
However, if you take a trip up to Canada in January you may change your mind if you can thaw it out long enough to change it.

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

Startime1955
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since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada
3 posted 2012-06-12 08:09 PM


I find each season has its own beauty and love them all...I have to say I love a nice fireplace in winter (I'm from Canada too so we have lots of winter here)...sooo comforting...*HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

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