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WTBAKELAR
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0 posted 2012-06-11 02:15 PM



Whisper quiet upon my neck

As your favorite shade leaves
soft pink tattoos on my skin

and your words find refuge
in my soul

Subtle inuendo in your sparkling eyes
with a murmered invitation, you

Whisper quiet upon my neck.

The answer is always NO, Until the question is asked.

© Copyright 2012 Wm. Tracey Bakelar - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2012-06-11 03:29 PM


LOL... I think I'll buy stock in SHOUT... lipstick stains are hard to get out! *S* Not that either of you are going to mind. *G*

Love this!

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2 posted 2012-06-11 03:50 PM


I agree with *S*...a delight to read...*HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

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3 posted 2012-06-11 05:49 PM


Within a few chosen words a passionate tempest you have created.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

ethome
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4 posted 2012-06-11 06:03 PM


Well written intimacy!

Eric

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5 posted 2012-06-13 09:35 AM


Delightful reading, Tracey.
                        Ida

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6 posted 2012-06-17 01:57 PM


sexy silence weaves around each word.
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7 posted 2012-07-02 11:32 AM


Thank you one and all for your comments on my short poem.  It is nice to see them.  Tracey
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