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WTBAKELAR
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0 posted 2012-06-11 02:13 PM



Can’t you see
Can’t you see
Can’t you see what those eyes do to me?

Can’t you tell
Can’t you tell
Can’t you tell I’m under your spell?

Can’t you feel
Can’t you feel

Can’t you feel that this feeling is real?

Can’t you
Can’t you

When you look at me, it’s all I can do
To keep inside what I feel for you
When you hold me close, and kiss my lips
I tremble at the touch of your fingertips
When you say my name, when you smile at me
Can’t you see,
can’t you see,
can’t you see?


Can’t you see
Can’t you see
Can’t you see what your love means to me?

Can’t you tell
Can’t you tell
Can’t you tell my heart is true?

Can’t you feel
Can’t you feel
Can’t you feel; what I feel?
Can’t you
Can’t you

When you look at me, it’s all I can do
To keep inside what I feel for you
When you hold me close, and kiss my lips
I tremble at the touch of your fingertips
When you say my name, when you smile at me
Can’t you see,

Can’t you see,

Can’t you see?


~~~~~~~~Can’t You?~~~~~~~~~~~

The answer is always NO, Until the question is asked.

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1 posted 2012-06-11 03:26 PM


You write romance so beautifully, Tracey... Your words leave a melody in my head... but I still wish I could hear it sung! *S*
Startime1955
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2 posted 2012-06-11 03:51 PM


Romance flows from your pen easily...it would be great to hear it sung...*HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

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