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Open Poetry #48

All the Day Long

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

0 posted 2012-06-07 04:43 PM

All the Day Long

The sky is blue not a cloud in sight
A warm afternoon with gentle breeze
Vision turns inward where love can grow
Words flow forth with a desire to write

Moments become minutes and then hours
The mind weaves dreams of eternal love
Blues blend with greens turning to turquoise
Lovers make their bed on wild flowers

The smell of pine brings the mountains close
The heart beats to loves ancient pattern
Waterfalls cascade to crystal lakes
Words of inspiration they compose

Gentle breeze whispers natures love song
Touching deep within two kindred souls
Birds and bees add to a sweet chorus
While she weaves loves dream all the day long

Karen Mc Neil
June 7, 2012

*may our dreams ever be magical*

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-06-07 05:01 PM

Ah, this is just lovely, Karen. You juxtaposed the environment and the landscape with beautiful visions of love and wonderful dreams. It gives me an idea for a poem combining those things also, but it won't be as lovely as your, because the weather here today is gray to black skies, rain, chilly and morose all the way around. Perfect setting for writing a poem about what has happened to me recently.

~*~ A word after a word after a word is power.--Margaret Atwood ~*~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2012-06-08 04:23 AM

quote:
The smell of pine brings the mountains close
The heart beats to love's ancient pattern
Waterfalls cascade to crystal lakes
Words of inspiration they compose

How absolutely lovely, dear dreaming Karen! You are the breeze of freshness dancing through your dreams ... all day long.

Enjoyed this much.

Margherita

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

3 posted 2012-06-08 03:07 PM

Words for the soul, Startime.
Ida

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2012-06-10 08:54 PM

A pleasure to read...James

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