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chourouk
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since 2012-05-29
Posts 52


0 posted 2012-06-06 03:19 PM



Your love is poetry
learnd me how to cry

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Your love is fire
inflames in my liver

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Your love is rain
igrrates the soil

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Your love is song
of shool...i learn it

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Your love learnd me
the language of lovers

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Your love like feather
swimms in the air

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Your love is light
lights up my life

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Your love is beautiful poem
written on the moon

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Your love engraved
in my heart

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by Chourouk

© Copyright 2012 chourouk - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
1 posted 2012-06-06 05:02 PM


Chourouk,

Welcome to Passions!
Please check your email for a
Very Special Greeting!

"The business of the poet...is to show the sorriness underlying the grandest things and the grandeur underlying the sorriest things." Thomas Hardy

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2012-06-06 05:18 PM



Your love is rain
irrigates the soil


Very beautiful first poetic offering, dear chourouk. Welcome again to Pip!

Margherita

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
3 posted 2012-06-06 05:25 PM


I concur with the ladies, welcome to the Blue Room.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Startime1955
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since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada
4 posted 2012-06-06 05:58 PM


Welcome to the blue room where you will find friends aplenty...*HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
5 posted 2012-06-07 03:15 AM


Welcome to PIP and keep up the creative work.

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

chourouk
Member
since 2012-05-29
Posts 52

6 posted 2012-06-07 04:37 AM


sunshine

All bouquets of roses and thanks for your
wonderful pass.

chourouk
Member
since 2012-05-29
Posts 52

7 posted 2012-06-07 04:54 AM


Margherita

Your presence brings the joy.
thank you for singing your name
in my page and thank you for your
strong presence.


chourouk
Member
since 2012-05-29
Posts 52

8 posted 2012-06-07 05:01 AM


Jerrypat2

Your presence such as spring season
for the page.

chourouk
Member
since 2012-05-29
Posts 52

9 posted 2012-06-07 05:23 AM


Startime

Your letters as soft music
thank u for your pass.

chourouk
Member
since 2012-05-29
Posts 52

10 posted 2012-06-07 05:30 AM


ethome

Your name is best sign makes me feel happy
and live success.

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