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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2012-06-06 10:08 AM

I would wonder now about the day after
when you said you would be beyond
that ache place altar, submission
that helpless feeling of gown fit

that leaves so much of you uncovered

and you climb down from the stairway then
lady like but without modesty on purpose
so accidental can make its way into you
and a stumble here and there would appear

to leave so much of you uncovered

but then the lights would dim for a moment
like the power had just been interrupted
before everything you had was public knowledge
so you were safely within your comfort zone

believing everything had been recovered...

until you stepped awnless above my glances

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daark

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

1 posted 2012-06-06 05:56 PM

very warm to the eyes that see...well done...*HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2012-06-06 06:42 PM

quote:
believing everything had been recovered...

until you stepped awnless above my glances

awnless love this word and the use you make of it. It is understood that your glances are dangerously magnetic

Very nice as usual.

Margherita

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

3 posted 2012-06-07 03:13 AM

I'm so glad Margherita explained that.

I love your work because of the clever ambiguity that makes it an adventure.

Once again very enjoyable.

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2012-06-07 06:13 AM

Ms Star, thank you

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Ms Mar, thank you lady friend

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ET..thanks much amigo

Nicole
Senior Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 1835
Florida

5 posted 2012-06-07 06:57 AM

  I like my comfort zones.

I love this.

It is kind of like having a secret phone conversation when you're at work and surrounded by people that want to nose in on what you're doing.

And a few other things, too.

There's more than one way to skin a cat...

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2012-06-07 07:41 AM

Ms Moppet...I just love skinning cats...real slow..thanks for wearing kitty whiskers and other things.

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