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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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comparing that wet witnessing we shared how we were both attracted with addiction to the shimmer things that soaked our minds when we fell off the flexible wagon of purity and ended up face down in dirty, to our elbows I guess we were both fisher kings without bait and there was plenty of hungry to take heed swallowing hook line and second helpings too as just getting it all over us was not enough when the inside of our cravings was insatiable you had your pale on three layers in depth then something about the contrast adjustment process trying to hide too much chocolate in white milk and then pretending you didn't notice how it looks when you pulled it out again, mostly by sipping slow but sometimes just by wearing it with nothing on _______________ daark |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Trying to hide too much chocolate in white milk - laughing. Exactly so, yes. When people fit, they just fit. It's not really anything that can be controlled, regardless of intent.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms Moppet...the flavors are always worth the wait I guess yes?...thank you for the grin |
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hmmm...Fisher kings...beautiful in so many ways |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Sweetsun, thanks lady friend |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
Love is so unpredictable...this poem shows wanting and needing in a very sensual way....well said...*HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Star, a fine line between sacred and crazy perhaps..thank you ms |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
mmmmmmmm ...this poem goes right into the category of favorites of yours and it seeps that kind of emotion that ... resembles a waterfall, yes! I love your reply to Startime too. When sacred combines with crazy (in the sense of being in our most NATURAL state) then fireworks are granted. Margherita |
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