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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2012-05-31 08:16 PM



Love Life


I suppose I could cry myself
to sleep each night
thinking that my life
is not just right
but in the morning
the thoughts are still there
the desires I want to share
with the woman I love,
now so far away in her presence
and slowly but surely
drifting away in my memory.


JamesLee
31May
2012

Who said love is a two
edged sword, I agree
with their words...


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JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2012-05-31 08:49 PM


There is hope for you, James, this is the first sign that she is drifting further and further away in your thoughts. I doubt you think so, but it is a vital step in your comeback.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Startime1955
Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada
2 posted 2012-05-31 09:18 PM


Have hope...love can do magical things in this world when we have hope...*HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2012-06-02 09:35 AM


Hello tender Hawaii man, you hurt, but your heart is a big open space and there is certainly room for memories, but for new dreams as well.

Enjoyed this.

Margherita

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