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Startime1955
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since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

0 posted 2012-05-30 05:49 PM


Dipped in Stardust

An eagle feather
perfectly formed
Sharpened at the tip
gifted by the male
Made to write of love
in the souls language
Soft and tender words
to caress the heart
Magic fills the sky
sings a lullaby
Moon smiles tenderly
watching quill prepare
Reaching for the ink
it’s dipped in stardust

Karen Mc Neil
May 30, 2012

*may our dreams ever be magical*

© Copyright 2012 Karen Mc Neil - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2012-05-30 05:57 PM


When dipped in stardust and spread across the sky it becomes magical and writes beautiful poetry and paints magnificent works of art. Love this, Karen.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
2 posted 2012-05-31 05:36 AM


Ms Star...the suggestion of flight of emotion with the feather and the capture of same in the confines of ink is a love song being played instrumental...enjoyed it ms
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2012-06-02 09:29 AM


Very lovely work, dear Karen!

Margherita

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