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Open Poetry #48

Beyond the Riverwalk

ken206573
Member

since 2008-10-14

Posts 487

0 posted 2012-05-30 12:58 PM

Sun shines, air cool and sweet.
Clouds moving to old new places
as I drift from the river walk to
the built-in boat dock. A lighthouse
incrusted with cemented rocks
and waters made of blue
gems. The aroma of sweet lilies,
daisy's and cherry blossoms
makes good for delicious
dreams. As I listen to the water
singing on rocks, the red-winged
black bird dances in tune. The trees
sway ever so softly while men search
for catfish, bass, trout and
whitefish. A breeze comes in sweeping
me and everything into it's
spell and enchanting us with
pleasure.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-05-30 01:28 PM

I'm waiting for the catfish to be fried, me. Very good poem with so much graphic lines about the environment. Really, quite breath-taking in my point of view.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

2 posted 2012-05-30 02:18 PM

A wonderful poem to capture the senses and create beautiful dreams...*HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

ken206573
Member

since 2008-10-14

Posts 487

3 posted 2012-05-30 04:35 PM

JerryPat2- Thanks alot, now I want fried catfish

Glad you enjoyed the poem.

Startime1955- I believe so too, wouldn't mind having one of those dreams as well. Thanks for the reading and comment.

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