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Open Poetry #48

the lady

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2012-05-30 12:26 PM

            the lady

Across the boundless
sky-rim moonlit sweep
  of endless hills,
only passing thoughts and
  gossamer clouds
ride this gentle evening breeze
and stir the starry fabric of
the heart and soul to dance
in wondrous memories
  and dreams
of such a lovely lady and
a night ... of perfect love.

                     --- b. e. adams (5/29/2012)

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2012-05-30 04:55 AM

Oh so beautiful, dear Bruce. You dwell in romantic memories and share them with your usual mastery.

Margherita

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

2 posted 2012-05-30 09:34 AM

Romance done well, the most beautiful of poetry.
Ida

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

3 posted 2012-05-30 10:35 AM

Very, very pretty.
Enjoyed, Ms. E

ken206573
Member

since 2008-10-14

Posts 487

4 posted 2012-05-30 12:59 PM

I surely felt the love in your poem. Simply enjoyed.

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

5 posted 2012-05-30 02:11 PM

Just as a gentle evening breeze caresses the face so to do these words caress the heart...beautifully written...*HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

6 posted 2012-05-30 03:40 PM

Would that my pen were dipped in the same poetical ink that yours is, Bruce. This is lovely.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

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