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Zall
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0 posted 2012-05-27 07:57 AM



The king's men read his final note
As Humpty Dumpty sat on the wall
One line was all he wrote:
"My destiny was always to fall"



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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2012-05-27 08:13 AM


When you turn the card up to read your life and it say "fall," you can try all you might, but fall you shall.

I don't believe in "the cards" telling our stories, but some do . . .

~*~ Love is composed of a single soul inhabiting two bodies.--Aristotle ~*~

Startime1955
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2 posted 2012-05-27 10:42 AM


very interesting...I too believe that we all must fall at sometime but the wonderful thing is we can pick ourselves up and put ourselves together again even stronger and better...*HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

2islander2
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3 posted 2012-05-27 10:57 AM


hello zal, i prefer not reading cards, i don't like bad surprises , thanks for the very enjoyable read,

yann

Zall
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4 posted 2012-05-27 11:00 AM


I believe the future is set..

Anything we do to "change things".. we were always going to do anyway.. ;-)

Thanks all :-)

ethome
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5 posted 2012-05-27 02:06 PM


Like all king's and dynasties this is so true.
Great stuff!

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

Zall
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6 posted 2012-05-28 04:41 AM


Thanks :-)
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