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JL
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since 2004-04-01
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0 posted 2012-05-20 08:44 PM

Plausible Paradigm

Clouds carry rain.
Rain settles dust.
Dust builds sod.

Sod holds seed.
Seed becomes grass.
Grass absorbs sun rays.

Wind dries sod.
Grass withers dead.
Clouds return again.

Complex fascinating archetype.
A plausible paradigm.
Is it not?

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2012-05-20 09:01 PM

Absolutely it is all that and when you sit and try to reason with it all, it blows you away. I liked this, L.

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JL
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2 posted 2012-05-20 09:07 PM

Thank you, Mr. JP!!

JL

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